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got my nerve
Contributed by
apartment213
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Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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so ur tired of mazes
falling in, falling for u
i have it no i dont
im a bad example of ur kinda guy
clumsy struggling to word this right
im tired of falling apart
needless to say i need to say
sweaty palms and messed up hair
i mean the best for u
if my words rnt there
my eyes will speak volumes
so ur tired of mazes
but ur silly ways, keep me on
i have it no i dont
best intentions mouth full of words
stutter to get my point out
sweaty palms and messed up hair
needless to say i need to say
sweaty palms and messed up hair
i mean the best for u
if my words rnt there
my eyes will speak volumes
so ur tired of mazes
im kept up like a jar
i have it no i dont
best intentions could get me crushed
time and again im tired of falling apart
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Re: got my nerve
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 01:48:49 PM AEST
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this would make a great song :)
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Re: got my nerve
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:36:36 PM AEST
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kenny, i've spoken with you time and again. i've read your contributions to this site. you are more than 'good enough' for this girl. why don't you see?!? tell her, fool! tell her! best of luck to you my friend,
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Re: got my nerve
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 07:41:39 PM AEST
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*sigh* kenny...all i can say is if se cant see it, she doesnt deserve it... if a guy like you fell apart over me, my god...i'd be in heaven... tell her how you feel, if all else fails, show her the poetry, she's bound to see what a great guy you are, and she'll never want to let you go... beautifully written, best one yet... you have a way with words...full of so much emotion and passion and anguish...and you share every breath every feeling every emotion with the reader...and like Ladydama said....it would make a beautiful song...like you said, you can sing...sing it to her... :O) Best of Luck tonight Kenny and i want to hear details... great write...
Your friend,
Lindsey |
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