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Broken Heart
Contributed by
icriedherariver
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Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 07:59:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Why is it so hard to fix a broken heart?
knowing that its over, again its back to the start.
The tragedy of loneliness dawns upon you,
filling your heart with sadness, where love and joy once grew
When whole and inlove, the heart makes you think like youre among clouds so high
giving you all the strength you need, you know youll make it through
But when broken and hurt, the heart gives a feeling youre falling down the sky.
giving you memories of distant clouds where emotions once happily flew
They say that when love comes to your heart, it leaves warmth that feels so nice.
And yes, love came and knocked at my heart's door, but left is as cold as ice.
Mending a heart's not easy as it takes time to heal
How can you forget about something when that something felt so real?
A lesson you'll learn in fixing a heart is that its easier to fix,
A box full of tricks for boys and girls than fixing a heart full of bricks.
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icriedherariver
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2008-09-27 19:59:58]
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Re: Broken Heart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 01:51:10 AM AEST
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this is very heartfelt and has extreme from the heart expression.. i love the rawness in it.. great job here
rock on,
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Re: Broken Heart
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 04:08:58 PM AEST
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Heartfelt write. Nicely done.
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Re: Broken Heart
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:53:29 PM AEST
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Well done, I enjoyed the read, though a bit sad, but well expressed.
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