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Romance Part Two (Hourglass)
Contributed by
April90
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Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 06:40:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The pages of the years
Are crying of the same;
Each word - each silent sound reminds of you,
I'm counting days
By just extracting from dimension 'love'
Dimension 'pain'.
And I'll forget you, love
Just when a blind man draws
One sound on the non-existing wall,
One of a rose
That's falling quietly on the castle's floor,
No longer whole.
Through all the darkest nights
I'll have your worst nightmares,
I'll be your one eternal candle's light,
I'm always there -
We breathe the same and so much filled with love
October air.
And when the ages die,
The broken hourglass -
The symbol of the battle 'Love and Time'-
Will speak of us.
The world, no longer knowing what is love,
Will speak of us.
Copyright ©
April90
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2008-09-27 18:40:30]
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Re: Romance Part Two (Hourglass)
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by wizard on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 04:40:16 AM AEST
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very nice,
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Re: Romance Part Two (Hourglass)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th February 2009 @ 04:39:17 AM AEST
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Wow, definitely have got to have some good ears to hear a rose falling quietly on the castle's floor. That struck me.... I loved that imagery. I would guess a blind man would have better hearing that a sighted one anyway.
This is really some great stuff.
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Tim |
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