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a season to remember
Contributed by
spooky
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Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 08:25:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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we look forward for the seasons to happen,
as the summer ends we search for the fall to change the colors on the trees,
as they fall we watch the children play in the bales of leaves that we raked up,
funny how time pasted by,
as the snow fall we see the beauty of the flakes dancing in the wind,
to much to be desired by some, desired more from me,
a beautiful blanket that it lays,
as it covers the trees where the leaves once were,
the seasons are signs of time,
another year, where did it go,,
i wish for another full of seasons,
to remember,,
craig s. meeks
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2008-09-27 08:25:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: a season to remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 01:11:19 PM AEST (User
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Craig~
I'm in total agreement with you my dear poet.
These lines are spot on.
the seasons are signs of time,
another year, where did it go,,
i wish for another full of seasons,
to remember,,
Time is passing us quickly too quickly I say.
You had me thinking of a lot of things with this
wonderfully penned write dearest Craig.
Thank you for the reminder.
Another superb write by you. Thank you for
sharing it with us.
hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: a season to remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 06:04:47 AM AEST (User
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: a season to remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 01:21:36 PM AEST (User
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A beautifull write, my friend. I can see the beauty of it all in this write.
good job.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: a season to remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 09:41:21 PM AEST (User
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this is so pretty, i just was at my window and the snow started, then i read this lovely poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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