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~Autumn~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 06:37:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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~~^~~
Autumn approaches
Orange shimmers through green leaves
A sight to behold
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2008-09-27 06:37:57]
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by spooky on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 07:04:43 AM AEST
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a beautiful thought to hold and to see,,
well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by wizard on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 07:38:07 AM AEST
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beautifully done jenni,
great job,
wiz |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 08:41:49 AM AEST
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| very nice! |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 01:14:55 PM AEST
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Jenni~
Wow girlfriend. This is sensational.
Beautifully penned as is all your
wonderful work my dear friend.
I adore this Jen. Thanks for sharing
it with us.
love & hugs
dreamer |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 02:46:49 PM AEST
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pretty Jen
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by Loende on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 04:03:55 PM AEST
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It's lovely, Jenni,just lovely. I adore Autumn and this is perfect. Job well done.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by roseabsolute on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 03:43:51 AM AEST
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It certainly is a sight to behold. I think many
can claim Fall as their favorite season.
Lovely haiku.
Rose* |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 07:29:56 AM AEST
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Jenni Jenni Jenni !
What a B E A U T I F U L haiku! I adore this time of year, (as I've
found many others do as well), and you have captured the feel and
breath of why. That second line is so damn lovely!
Gorgeous work hun!
*hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 08:23:59 AM AEST
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| lovely and my favorite time of year |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by jnep on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 09:54:21 AM AEST
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| i love the imagery! haha glad to say i inspired this, you inspired me as well. :) |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 01:43:59 PM AEST
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Awesome write and awesome autumn.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 03:19:30 PM AEST
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Ahh! yes Jenn, and you couldn't
have wrriten this for a more
appropriate and appreciative
reader than i, a season so
synonomus with my home
town in new england, most
lovely . . .
take care & likewise ty 4
your read & comment . . .
((((Jenni_K))))
Ben . . . |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 02:44:17 AM AEST
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One of the things that I like about Haiku's is the challenge of how much you can portray with a minimum amount of words.
Yours says so much beyond just evoking feelings for the season. |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 02:49:17 AM AEST
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Great write! My Most favorite time of the year.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 11:50:47 AM AEST
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| This is anawesome haiku. Thanks for sharing it! |
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Re: ~Autumn~
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 01:08:58 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful! a perfect haiku!
hugs n' love nessa |
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