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hollow
Contributed by
sillychristina18
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Friday, 26th September 2008 @ 04:06:21 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Ugly
and Unappreciated
Below my Better Half
Set apart from the Team
A hollow vessile of my past Self
Copyright ©
sillychristina18
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2008-09-26 16:06:21]
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Re: hollow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 03:16:04 AM AEST
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I am pleasantly surprised. I expected to come in here and read a longer work that might out think it's simplisitc yet powerful title. Instead, is this short and yet potent thought. A powerful display of confined emotion, though sad. There is so much said in so little and that is a fine practice. I don't think many people understand this exact emotion. I am one of them. Though I have had discussions with many people (mostly females) that have been here. The only thing I can tell you as I found to tell them is that no soul is below another soul. It is our actions and intentions that define us. If the actions and intentions of the team and your other half are to exclude you it is because you probably in some way intimidate them in some way. This usually is the case. The only way to help is to show them you accept them more than hoping they accept you. Rejection is mostly caused by the insecurity of the rejector, not the problems of the rejectee.
YOU ARE BENEATH NOBODY! The strange thing is, those that know this most are those you think you are beneath.
BRAVO!
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Re: hollow
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by wizard on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 08:02:17 AM AEST
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nicely done,
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Re: hollow
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by roseabsolute on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 03:33:53 AM AEST
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I believe you may find yourself again as long
as you keep writing. You'll happen upon a
newer you and will fully find and appreciate
you. Lovely work.
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