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Once Over
Contributed by
brownsugar8272
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Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 12:45:41 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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YES, the sun will set
then everything will be still
Will you be ready?
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2008-09-25 00:45:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Once Over
(User Rating: 1 ) by Catalina on
Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 01:38:16 AM AEST (User
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love this.... Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Once Over
(User Rating: 1 ) by MakeShift_2134 on
Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 03:55:28 AM AEST (User
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Perfect in it's simplicity. |
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Re: Once Over
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 10:34:08 AM AEST (User
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A very potent question..
Good haiku..
Well done..
Jenni |
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