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No One Knows
Contributed by
catalina
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Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 11:50:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No one knows,
How I got to this point...
Or there was a time,
I smoked a joint...
NO one knows,
I lie awake endless nights...
The racing thoughts,
That boggle my mind...
The time I woke,
To a broken heart...
Almost taking my own life,
Because things fell apart...
No one knows,
How i struggled to get by...
No one knows,
The pain I''ve survived...
Or the endless days,
I don''t remember...
I think it started,
Sometime in September...
For the woman I''ve become,
Is only my current state...
No one knows,
More than once i was raped...
Or how I committed,
A shameful crime...
No one knows,
Why my baby boy is blind...
No one knows,
They may think they do...
But no one really,
Has the means to judge you...
Unless they''ve walked with you,
Day in and day out...
No one knows,
What you''re really about...
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catalina
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2008-09-23 23:50:54]
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Re: No One Knows
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th September 2008 @ 12:03:08 AM AEST
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heartfelt and so true...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: No One Knows
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by Lilymaemax on
Wednesday, 24th September 2008 @ 03:15:03 AM AEST
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We all have history and as you said so well no one knows even if they know the event .They dont know how each is affected .But because of all our experience we all become amazing humans and can empathize with others.well said
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Re: No One Knows
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 24th September 2008 @ 06:01:46 AM AEST
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Extremely touching! I empathize with you....
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Re: No One Knows
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by brownsugar8272 on
Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 03:49:29 AM AEST
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great write can really relate with you no one knows what hides behind a beautiful smile
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Re: No One Knows
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by brownsugar8272 on
Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 03:49:35 AM AEST
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great write can really relate with you no one knows what hides behind a beautiful smile
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