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Desolate
Contributed by
navydocny
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Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 10:58:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The desolation of her beauty, is only in her eyes
Stark is always her allure, and such is her disguise
If she could see in herself, what I have always seen
Splendor of the greatest kind, the type that needs no preen
No matter what she always thinks, I always think the same
There is not and quite as such, her love I shall reclaim
So many words we’ve yet not spoke, so many feelings strong
What I hope is that she’ll say, I’ve loved you all along
I know the face behind the mask, the sturdy balustrade
Feelings that we want to have, no crueler a charade
Though she may attempt to hide, such wondrous affection
One day when she’ll pine for love, she’ll look in my direction……
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Re: Desolate
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by wizard on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 12:51:13 PM AEST
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nice post steve, your sense of longing shines through nicely,
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Re: Desolate
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by mrpeanut64 on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 01:30:02 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. I thought you expressed yourself very well. |
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Re: Desolate
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 01:48:10 PM AEST
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| beautiful...it brought tears to my eyes... |
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Re: Desolate
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by Lilymaemax on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 04:05:47 PM AEST
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Time is a great healer and sometimes barriers have to be overcome but if her a
affection is so worthwhile then wait on!!!
lilymae |
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Re: Desolate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 12:51:41 AM AEST
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Steve, my thoughts are with you in the coming week, (and am TOTALLY
excited for you!) This is intensely beautiful. It is so full. So full of well .. just
everything! (if that makes sense). Your emotion is clear and your faith and
trust in love is unrelenting. I think that's what makes this so damn beautiful.
Thinking about you with the best of wishes ~
~ Breezy
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Re: Desolate
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 07:37:35 AM AEST
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this is sad, but beautifully written, like a hearts lament...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Desolate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 10:48:13 AM AEST
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Steve,
This piece is deep with pasiion and love.
Very well written.....Mike |
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Re: Desolate
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 26th September 2008 @ 09:54:27 AM AEST
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Steve~
This brought a tear to my eye.
So deep and beautifully expressed.
You are a gifted writer. Keep writing
Steve and never give up my friend.
Hope does wonders for the heart~
Take care
hugs & prayers,
dreamer |
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Re: Desolate
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by karoody on
Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 05:00:08 PM AEST
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i seemed to have overlooked this lovely write...glad i backed up a bit and found this one. in spite of the pain you draw for the reader, you still offer us a beautiful picture of emotions. it's amazing how you do that...
kara |
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