|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
What is a Real Man?
Contributed by
breathofrane
on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 04:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
|
When your world is falling
Down around your feet
When there is nothing left around you
But blood, bodies, and dirt
When your country tells you to stand strong
But all you want to do is go home
When you rather be holding your mama’s hand
Rather than a cold metal gun
When all you hear is noise and screams
And you rather hear Amazing Grace
When all you want to do is sleep in your own bed
And you never sleep, always awake in your cammies
When your world is falling down around your feet
Even real men cry.
April 20, 2003
Copyright ©
breathofrane
... [
2008-09-21 16:45:22]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: What is a Real Man?
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 01:56:49 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
An extremely powerful write.... I could envision the entire situation... and my heart bleeds for those brave men...and yes, real men DO cry....
Thank you for sharing this...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: What is a Real Man?
(User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 02:34:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| great write and real men do cry but they also should not bite off more than they can chew...good write |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
