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Dear Jesus,

Contributed by tifrob on Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 03:18:10 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I

My daughter is raised and moving on,
Towards I hope a brighter dawn,
My main concern is for her life,
Only You can walk by her side,
Only You can hold her hand,
Only You can understand,
I worry so much about her still,
My little girl is grown but free willed,
She doesn’t think before she speaks,
She prefers riotous to being meek,
She will follow a friendly foe,
Never knowing when to let go,
Her heart is broken more than not,
Searching for friends in the wrong spots,
She doesn’t realize they’re not friends,
Until troubles found in the end,
I’m asking You to hold her tight,
Wrap her in love and show her light,
Only You can see her soul,
I’m her mom ~ Please don’t let go,
She needs You to lead the way,
To hold her hand everyday,
You gave her to me a short time ago,
I made mistakes as You know,
Since she’s no longer a little girl,
Only You can guide her world.

II

Now, You have blessed her with a son,
Life’s full circle has begun,
Teach her to hold with gentle hands,
To play and love all that she can,
Guide her heart ~ Set her feet,
Remind her ~ That someday You’ll meet,
Help her to know her baby’s soul,
And to realize that babies don’t know,
They know nothing until they are taught,
It sounds simple but it’s not,
A single mother sometimes forgets,
Anger flairs ~ Then regrets,
Let her see and understand,
That her words and deeds ~ Will make him a man.

III

Finally, You have sent my boy,
He is my heart and my joy,
Being a grandma ~ I never wanted to be,
So, I’ve settled for being a G,
Let me say ~ My life is great,
This little boy was worth the wait,
Love sparkles in his little eyes,
Giggles radiate for no reasons why,
Hugs and kisses are always free,
The way love is meant to be.

Thank You Jesus ~ For this special soul,
My little feller ~ Is a blessing ~ I know.

Amen

Copyright Â© tifrob ... [ 2008-09-21 15:18:10]
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Re: Dear Jesus, (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 01:17:52 AM AEST
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Wow....This is awesome, Tifrob....I wish I had written it... It describes exactly, the situation with my little sister whom I raised when our Mom died. She has given me a 'grandson' and in a couple months, hopefully, a grand daughter.
This prayer is touching and so sincere... I wish you all the very best in life..
Hugs
Jenni

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