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Camp Slayer
Contributed by
navydocny
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Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 12:43:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Crunching of the ice
The smell of a car burning
My walk into work
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navydocny
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2008-09-21 12:43:57]
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Re: Camp Slayer
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 01:26:45 PM AEST
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Nice images in these few lines, Steve... You're getting better at these....
Keep them coming...
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Re: Camp Slayer
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by Spike on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 11:35:42 PM AEST
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Very clear images, Steve, even if I can only reference them through the pixalated reality of the tv and internet.
Haiku in a war zone: I'm sure this was one of the ways of the samuri to stay sensitive and focussed.
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Re: Camp Slayer
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by karoody on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 12:39:10 PM AEST
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unsettling scene...what a way to wake up! geez! is this before or after your coffe and prayer time???
:-)
smiles and blessings always...
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