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&HerHeartBroke
Contributed by
MelanieLovesScott08
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Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 11:59:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She was leaving on the 21st it was more like riding in a hearse. She had no choice but to go away they both knew she'd be back some day. Her bags were packed, everything she lacked but she had no choice but to go back. They sat on a bench outside the train station waiting for that ride that would take her to her location. That location that she didnt know that place she didnt want to go. The train arrived at 9:37, she didnt want to leave because in his arms she was in heaven. It took everything they had to stand up and as they did her eyes filled up. She was holding tight onto his hand afraid of letting go or making a stand. They walked to the tracks, in their hearts it was making cracks. They gave their "sqeeze tights" but it just didnt feel right. They said their goodbyes and their i love yous he said its only nine months and we'll make it through. She believed every word he said even in doubt but she couldnt help but pout. It was time to leave getting harder to believe. She boarded the train, she was almost gone, they tears she cried they had shown. Not only was she leaving him but she left behind her whole she didnt think that they would ever part. Nine months later is the day and in the end they both got their way.
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Re: &HerHeartBroke
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 12:59:15 PM AEST
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Very nice write,
sounds endearing...
I can feel a desperation and loss with this..
very strong..
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Re: &HerHeartBroke
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 01:44:30 AM AEST
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A very touching write...sad but this is life! If the love is true, it would withstand nine months... Hang in there.....
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