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Inches Apart
Contributed by
navydocny
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Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 11:42:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Nothing ever created such start, as when our hearts were inches apart
We with spider’s tangled limbs, seeking out each other with lustful whims
Hide to hide holding hands, stroking through love’s countless strands
All that’s remembered and all that’s known, every lovely feature, the slightest soupcon
Breathing in each other, years of affection, culminating towards each other’s advection
Who could want the vile love of another, even if all that we’ve wanted is nearly asunder
Getting what you give and giving what you get, our circle of love, without which to fret
My head on your chest I hear you respire, half my life spent with, and still you enfire
Do you still have such thoughts of me, of what there was and yet what can be
I hope for naught but to hold you when, our hearts are inches apart again
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navydocny
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2008-09-20 11:42:42]
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Re: Inches Apart
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by shelby on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 12:24:28 PM AEST
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Oh, this is so darn sweet I could almost cry. Has she had a chance to read it or hear you read it??
Lovely work, I always get a thrill reading your work.
Hugs
Be safe
Michelle |
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Re: Inches Apart
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 12:42:50 PM AEST
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lovely
Shari |
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Re: Inches Apart
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 03:26:17 AM AEST
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heartfelt sweet and beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Inches Apart
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by karoody on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 12:34:29 PM AEST
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where was i??? slap me next time i miss all your posts like this! your stuff is too beautiful to not read...
you poor so much into your work...you impress me...
bravo
love and blessings always
kara |
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