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Granted.
Contributed by
Miseria
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Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 06:27:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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An open wound reveals reality.
Reality is known as something
That we can understand.
The rain grants inspiration,
And the sun grants creativity.
The open wound gracefully heals,
Hiding everything that was previously revealed.
Reality escapes our minds,
Only to re-appear in our most surreal dreams.
It cannot be avoided,
The reality that surrounds us,
Is nothing more than a dream
Brought to life.
Copyright ©
Miseria
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2008-09-20 06:27:48]
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Re: Granted.
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by wizard on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 07:15:01 AM AEST
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nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Granted.
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by Spike on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 11:29:25 PM AEST
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A lilting, lighter than air quality to your reflections and a refreshing piece to read.
Spike
ps: my son recently received a severe open wound to his leg and yes, the reality is enormous. Thankfully he is healing, and part of that healing is forgetting his irrefutable visceral nature, which we all seem to do, it seems, to abide our fragile nature. |
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Re: Granted.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 04:57:41 AM AEST
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Isn't it amazing how in life we all drift in and out of reality....
A pleasure to read. |
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