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~Beside the lonesome moore~
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 03:32:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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They say her spirit walks
beside the lonesome moore.
Where the ghosts haunt
its muddy shores forever more.
Her raven hair shining
beneath the blue of the moon
her dress of white spotted with blood
her death came to soon.
They say her spirit walks
beside the lonesome moor.
If you listen in the dark
you will hear her screams forever more.
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shelby
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2008-09-20 03:32:40]
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Re: ~Beside the lonesome moore~
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 05:37:20 AM AEST
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Ooooh... so eerie.... but such a lovely write... Good flow..
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Re: ~Beside the lonesome moore~
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 05:58:37 AM AEST
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good imagery
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Re: ~Beside the lonesome moore~
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by navydocny on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 06:30:12 AM AEST
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Thank you for getting me outta here, if only for the moment!
Great once again!
Steve |
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Re: ~Beside the lonesome moore~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 03:29:22 AM AEST
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wicked good title, excellent poem
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Beside the lonesome moore~
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by Crow on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 07:07:38 AM AEST
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| you said you were going to write some dark" this is a great start my friend.. good read. Lane...I know i`m in trouble" with you sweetie", honey, is this helping one little bit! lol |
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