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The love of a father
Contributed by
conorshawn
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Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 01:21:02 AM in AEST
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The love of a father
A father’s love is pure
His love is true.
He holds her tight
With all his might, when the tears come in the night.
His law is overlooked
She is falling out of place.
The burdens are great
She is growing up.
Becoming a young lady
Hanging around with guys that are shady!
Still his love is unchanged
Loving her more each and every day.
She will stumble and fall
Yet his love remains unchained.
He sits and watches
Her make, her mistakes.
Like the sun in the sky
Protecting the earth below, it is he who watches over her.
The rules are strict, may seem unfair
It is for her own good he has been there before.
He holds her tight
With a warm embrace.
Letting her know
Everything
Will be alright.
Patrick
9/19/08
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Re: The love of a father
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by Catalina on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 02:01:55 AM AEST
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wow, i loved this write! Thankx for sharing!
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Re: The love of a father
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by navydocny on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 01:04:40 PM AEST
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Being a parent is one of life's greatest gifts...
This is a wonderful write which highlights that!
Keep up the great work!
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Re: The love of a father
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 06:00:16 PM AEST
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I'm telling ya now that protectiveness only gets stronger as they grow.
That's probably why we have grand kids.
So we can still obsess and ease off ~ Just switching our focus.
That's my deep thought for the day...lol
By the way, your poem was great.
~Me~ |
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