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Dan And The Sniper
Contributed by
navydocny
on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 11:05:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Watching the fish swim
The sniper’s bullet misses
The wind was blowing
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Re: Dan And The Sniper
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 11:17:41 AM AEST (User
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Thank God for that wind.....
Good one, Steve...
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Re: Dan And The Sniper
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 01:04:42 PM AEST (User
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hey, you have a real knack for these! beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dan And The Sniper
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 10:27:36 PM AEST (User
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well done
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Re: Dan And The Sniper
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 03:34:30 AM AEST (User
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Steve,
incredible work here be safe over there too.
hugs
Michelle
tosses bright wild daisy |
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