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Seduced by Suicide

Contributed by HeroinHailee on Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 12:21:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She's sleeping awake and choking on a dream
a dream where all is nothing and nothing is what it seems
Her life's a tragic love story
Her heart is currently broken
watch her in all her glory
Her smile is fake and its so well spoken

Tonight her heart is cold
lost in all your lies
and those shallow replies
tonight she'll just get lost in your eyes
and hear your transparent cries

the saddest part of a broken heart
isn't the ending so much as the start
the tragedy erupts at the very first spark...
losing your mind for the sake of your heart

Eventually she was obsolete
with nothing to do
but cry herself to sleep
the happiness is all but real
empty silence with cries she concealed
the insomnia tends to keep her awake at night...
too scared to breathe... so full of fright
she's smiling... she looks happy
but then again, nothing is what it seems

Courted by corruption
blessed by blasphemy
persuaded by perfection
wooed by woe
seduced by suicide

she's sleeping awake and choking on a dream

Copyright © HeroinHailee ... [ 2008-09-18 12:21:01]
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Re: Seduced by Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by amber_vonHorror on Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 10:37:12 PM AEST
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hey i liked this alot
it kind of reminded me of some of the stuff ivr written

it flows really well well done;

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