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~Deeper Than That~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 06:34:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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~~^~~
Sitting there, chatting late at night,
Wishing they could spend more time together,
Like hours, even days,
sitting on a beach somewhere, listening to the tides roll in and the birds sing.
and the full moon rising as the sun sets in the horizon.
Listening to each other’s heartbeat,
each heaving sighs of contentment.
fingers entwined with the others as they gaze eye to eye.........
noses barely brushing.....
lips an inch apart.......
Breaths coming quicker now.....
tension soaring
anticipation high..
lips touching,
the electricity flowing,
the joining is soft, yet hot and unique...
Both shivering at the touch....both wanting each other so much
Slowly undressing each other as their eyes caress the other’s body.....
They continue staring at each other longingly,
Knowing that the reactions to the touch would be unstoppable.
She peels away her eyes from his gorgeous body
Long enough to look into his eyes and smile.
She leans over to him and whispers,
‘I love you, my friend,
But we both know this is wrong.’
With these words, she runs off down to the water’s edge
Hoping he’d follow her.
Hoping he’d say that it wasn’t
But knowing in her heart it was.
She takes a plunge into the cool water,
Knowing that is the only plunge she will take.
He follows her into the water,
Again taking her hands in his,.
This time he whispers to her,
‘It’s ok, my love,
We don’t need to go there.
The love we have for each other goes deeper than that.’
With those words, he kisses her gently on the lips,
Takes her hand, and leads her back to the beach,
Where they get dressed and sit again,
This time she rests her head on his shoulder,
Happy and content just to be with him.
Their wedding day would come soon enough…
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-09-18 06:34:44]
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 08:51:45 AM AEST
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Very, very, very romantic....
Lots of emotion and anticipation.....
Great write as always!
Steve |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 10:00:46 AM AEST
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| Wow, what an awesomely romantic and sensual poem, Jenni. They are some strong people there being able to wait after that. You write these soooooo well. Thanks for a most enjoyable read. |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 11:31:56 AM AEST
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Wow Jenni,
It was very easy to get lost in this piece.
Such deep romance and passion.
Awesome write.........Mike |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by Crow on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 12:45:26 PM AEST
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| what an excellent write Jenni, I`m a confirmed single guy...this almost makes me want to start something up! lol good read my friend. Lane |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 10:10:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful as usual Jenni
~Stephan |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 11:40:25 PM AEST
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Damn Jenni! From the sensual beginnings to the peaceful and
too beautiful end, this wrapped my heart in comfort and warmth.
There is a gentleness to this that I cannot escape. Sometimes I
think the human heart is bombarded with so much emotion that
the body can't contain it. Luckily, there is always paper and pen ...
Beautiful and classy. Just like the author. Sending
you dreams and hopes sweet lady. *hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 05:02:05 AM AEST
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sooo beautiful... great images... 'sigh' sooo romantic...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by karoody on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 06:25:13 AM AEST
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awesome job on this one! very beautiful and sweet. so few people slow down and enjoy life in general anymore. the fact that they are relishing in the moments of their relationship like this speaks to my heart. thank you for this write
kara |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 08:31:59 AM AEST
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breathtaking....your hot here girl....excellent write
Shari |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th September 2008 @ 03:28:41 PM AEST
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Thank you for lifting my spirits
with your magical write my dear
friend. After reading those two
sad poems, it was good to read
something on a much happier
note. A write filled with love, passion
and deep romance. Breathtakingly
beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with
us.
love & hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 02:48:44 AM AEST
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Whew, you go girl.
Beautifull and steamy.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~Deeper Than That~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:23:30 AM AEST
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| sexual stuff but with a beautiful ending. there is some fabulous imagery in this. it makes you feel such a contrasting array of emotions, just wonderful. |
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