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Burial At Sea
Contributed by
Alisteal_Rayne
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Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 03:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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From whence you came
Soon will return
This one last thing
To do, we yearn
When you go back
From where you came
My love for you
Will never change
The Ocean calls
It screams, it cries
And I know
The time is nigh
You will drift
And very soon
The sea will come
And swallow you
The bell will toll
Singing high
That your watch
Has passed us by
Copyright ©
Alisteal_Rayne
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2008-09-17 15:44:34]
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Re: Burial At Sea
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 08:31:04 PM AEST
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This is simple and so sweet... really touching.
I am sorry for your loss.. I am particularly touched by this as it reminds me of my nephew's ashes being tossed at sea...and it's the way, I want to be...one with the ocean..
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Re: Burial At Sea
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by navydocny on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 10:40:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful, sad and timeless as your love for her..
My deepest and most sincere sympathy...
Steve |
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Re: Burial At Sea
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 11:26:37 PM AEST
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A powerful elegy. So sorry for your loss.
Spike |
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Re: Burial At Sea
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 07:09:32 PM AEST
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I have read a couple of your wonderful
poems, but I just can't seem to find
the right words to right back to you.
I'm so sorry for your loss. I have cried
and cried for I have felt your pain through
your words my friend.
Beautiful angel Calypso~
She's always watching over you from heaven~
*hugs you tight*
My thoughts are with you.
hugs & prayers,
sue m
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Re: Burial At Sea
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 04:50:12 AM AEST
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this is beautiful sweetie, {{{{calypso}}}}} im sooo sorry, it is so heartbreaking,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Burial At Sea
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by ragman on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 03:50:31 AM AEST
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| touching poem....i scattered my fathers ashes at sea....meant a lot to me....thankyou.... |
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