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good nite

Contributed by spooky on Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 08:50:25 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

we see people dying everyday,
we see things that shouldn't happen but it does,
we want to help, but what can we do,
we ponder,,we think of what if,
not good enough,

we get calls from friends that someone had died,
i'm sorry is there anything that i can do?
nothing thanks for calling to let me know,,
maybe,,just maybe i could of made a diffrence,
not good enough,

we want to do things for them,
we do when we get the chance,
but what if it happens as we are leaveing the house?
no one knows what happens,
but when we get the call, as you were leaveing it happened,

if you were there would they have lived longer?
no,,,,
if you would have just arrived to save them , would it matter?
no,,,
we can't control life, or make it last a few moments longer to say the things we want to say, no because
it happens,
I lost to friends with in two months,,
that meant that much to me,,
no excuse for me,
maybe if i had been there it might have made a diffrence,,,

good nite vergi,,good nite elise...

craig s. meeks

Copyright © spooky ... [ 2008-09-17 08:50:25]
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Re: good nite (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 04:40:28 AM AEST
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im sorry for your losses craig, ~big hugs~ im here if you need to talk, this is a beautifully moving write...

love n' hugs nessa

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