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Alcoholic genius
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 08:44:46 AM in AEST
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Drunken is the best place for me,
through a bluury haze,
it helps me see.
through glassy eyes my heart will stare,
look through my soul,
like i was never there.
cut to the bar last orders rung
that golden bell
like angels sung.
morning after the night before
my mind wakes up
nevermore.
i tell myself in a hungover muse
never agin
my mind i lose.
but come friday nite of fun
the drunken carousel
has just begun.
so as i sit her beer in hand
remind me once
that life was grand
remind me twice of a life so true
but remind me again
of a life without you.
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bigbadblinkybill
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2008-09-17 08:44:46]
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Re: Alcoholic genius
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 08:53:19 AM AEST
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very moving write. so much emotion, i was sitting there with you. i knew the song. i knew the bar and that liquid courage. but that courage is only temporary. cause you sober up and that hangover is so vicious, isn't it?
thank you for this
kara
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Re: Alcoholic genius
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by Dustin on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 12:30:51 PM AEST
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| haha, i swear im gonna quit drinking . Awesome Write! |
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Re: Alcoholic genius
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by Catalina on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 02:28:02 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. I loved it! Thankx 4 sharing! |
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