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As You Were
Contributed by
ThirtyDays
on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The day you caught my eye
Like a lone star in the sky
I didn't know what it was
It was so innocent
Who would have known
It was like having heaven sent
The days we'd go for a walk
Or just sit down and talk
It took me to another place
It was just you
And I alone together
All things felt so true
On the day you said "I love you"
I was raised above the few
My life, it had meaning
It had a name
For I knew Emily
I knew I'd never be the same
The day came when I needed you
I was lost in a sea of blue
I ventured into your space
For your loving touch
And your tenderness
I realized then, I had asked too much
I feared my days were in number
I had no peace, I had no slumber
I broke the rules
That part of heaven
You had given
All was lost, the day of 11/11
I know one day you'll walk by
I hope you won’t see me, you won't say, "Hi"
You say you haven't changed
That may be true
But to me you have
And I don't want to stop loving you
Copyright ©
ThirtyDays
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2003-03-19 00:05:00]
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Re: As You Were
(User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:47:13 AM AEST
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| oh, this is so sad... i am sorry for your heartbreak... i hope things get better... blessings... |
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Re: As You Were
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:43:00 PM AEST
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| this is such a good poem, a story well told and feelings honestly expressed, i'm sure life will turn around for you |
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