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Im Lonely

Contributed by youngpoet69 on Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 07:27:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

come save me from this tragic ending
my life has already ended
take away this anguishing pain
take me from this lonely abyss

keep me locked up
handcuff me for all time
take me away from this life i live
let it fall to pieces

turn back the hands of time
release me from time and space
honor my passing
take me away from this horrid world

i'm lonely once again
im lonely twice once more
im lonely three times bigger
im lonely four hits of a crack pipe

i hate this life
i hate the things im doing
i can't control it
i love the way it goes

i hate you
i hate everyone
i hate myself
i hate this world

im dieing inside
more and more the days go by
im hoping things will change
but i know they can't

for things always been the same
they've always gotten worse
now that my lover s gone
he gave his heart to another

i hate myself
i hate you
i hate everyone
i hate the world

im lonely once again
im lonely twice once more
im lonely three times bigger
im lonely four hits of a crack pipe

Copyright © youngpoet69 ... [ 2008-09-16 19:27:49]
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Re: Im Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by 143 on Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 09:24:36 PM AEST
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Wow that's really sad,
Due to what you had,
That pain is real, I know your sore,
I promice the sun will shine again,
Like never before,
So keep your heart up, And live for today,
Throw that Crack away,
You don't need it anyway.

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