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Light Of Snow
Contributed by
dustin
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Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 12:18:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Ill stay in the snowy mist.
There i was first kissed
by beauty
Its where my soul
prexisted my body
Time doesnt exist here
Its where the beginning is
God molded us here
She holds me once again there
in her loving arms i will remain
forever hers
in this evil domain
Copyright ©
dustin
... [
2008-09-16 12:18:24]
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Re: Light Of Snow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 12:38:14 PM AEST
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This was wonderful. I'm not sure I get the last line, unless
the woman holding you is the Ice Princess. lol Forgive ..
It truly is beautiful. The title is so tempting. I mean, it has so
many meanings, (or could have) and there is such a gentleness
to it. And your words fall as softly as the white flakes you speak of.
Whatever this is about, you've done it beautifully.
~ Breezy
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Re: Light Of Snow
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 01:47:51 PM AEST
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This is light and pretty I love it.
I am with Rox bit confused by the end unless you were meaning living in our world today is evil??
Anyway great poem short but emotive
Michelle |
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Re: Light Of Snow
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by PreciousKitten on
Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 12:42:54 AM AEST
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| very sweet poem. this is a piece of art and work. this one almost made me cry. i loved it that much. |
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