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My Journey
Contributed by
karoody
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Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I woke up this morning
And punched the mirror in disgust
I hated where I was,
But now I hate who I've become.
Because of my selfish ignorance,
I lost it all
Told lies and false promises
Threw away my life and followed a man-
Allowing him to break my heart daily
Even worse, placed a boundary before everything I loved
I ran and hid from it all,
Took the easy road,
But now one of the people I loved most is gone-
I will never be able to tell him
Of all the things I took for granted,
All the love I had in my heart,
And the peaceful child of myself that died.
There is a void before the ones that stood by me
My loved ones are separated by a deep chasm,
I am forced to taste the fruit of my mistakes.
How do I explain?
Even if they forgive me,
I will never find that forgiveness in my heart
For I have failed at this game of life,
Let the stakes rise too high...
So now I sit here,
The peaceful child inside me lost-
Knowing it's out of my hands
And I can't go back.
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-03-18 23:05:00]
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Re: My Journey
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:46:33 PM AEST
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| Very well done on this peice,I really liked this! Christina |
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Re: My Journey
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:07:10 AM AEST
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| i like this too, although, i cannot recall the original... must go back and read... remember, dear friend, we can always go back, and be ok... i am working on this tonight, lol, as i write... know that there are friend with you... blessings... |
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Re: My Journey
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:09:55 AM AEST
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| ok, i went back and read "shattered"... actually, i like both... they can both stand alone and fit well for different readers... that's the beauty in being talented ::grin::... blessings... |
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Re: My Journey
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by Apartment213 on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 04:36:26 AM AEST
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| hey kara this was really really good u sound so hurt and sincere my blessings always kenny!!! and thank you for comenting on my work |
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Re: My Journey
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 11:16:58 AM AEST
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they are both well written and emotional poems...I enjoyed them...you show much talent ..I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Sharon |
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Re: My Journey
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 04:40:57 PM AEST
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| im not sure if i read shattered yet but i like this one seems to show so much anger with oneself |
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Re: My Journey
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:30:02 AM AEST
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Every time I read this I like it more and more thnx for posting this and no thnx are needed the poem would not be what it was without you.
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: My Journey
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by venkat on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 05:57:31 AM AEST
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| seen this , both have their own entities. these are your heart felt feelings.. Thanks for sharing.. venkat |
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Re: My Journey
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by Jaylee123 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 12:40:27 AM AEST
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| GREAT writing!!!!!!!! Wish I had your talent................Jaylee |
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