|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Osama Bin Laden
Contributed by
SirCallower
on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 01:05:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
|
O insane lambda
A blame is on D.N.A
Bad man is alone
Copyright ©
SirCallower
... [
2008-09-15 01:05:56] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Osama Bin Laden
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 04:52:27 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
cool! i never actually got to read anagramatical haiku....they must be so hard to write...looks like it would give me a migraine...kudos to you...
kara |
|
|
Re: Osama Bin Laden
(User Rating: 1 ) by navydocny on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 08:44:27 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Haha!
I like the second line.....
It's that or bad parenting.....
Great suff!
Keep it up!
Steve |
|
|
Re: Osama Bin Laden
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 10:37:47 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
oh my word! This is impressive!! To think that you used an anagram
and did this in haiku form!! Damn well done, friend!
oh, and yeah, kudos on the assault! Some people are just so vile; who
knows why they are the way they are? The seventh circle awaits him!!
Great job!
~ Breezy |
|
|
Re: Osama Bin Laden
(User Rating: 1 ) by Muinanyere on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great write this is wonderful |
|
|
Re: Osama Bin Laden
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ninpo11 on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 11:43:24 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is great! |
|
|
Re: Osama Bin Laden
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 08:20:21 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wonderful job on this I am terrible at writing haiku you did great/ liked the subject as well.
Michelle |
|
|
|