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Beautiful You
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 08:50:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Oh how i miss
this beautiful you
You gave my my first pen and pad
and a chair out of view.
You showed me what manners were.
you put a mold to my heart.
your in my first memory
thats where my life starts
from the beginning you were there
to make sure my belly was full
you made sure my path was pure
and that i stayed good in school
every day i miss
this beautiful you
such a shame you had
to be taken so soon
i do not fear Nana
my mother so grand
this is not goodbye
i'll see you later my friend
Copyright ©
redsleeve
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2008-09-14 08:50:11]
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Re: Beautiful You
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 11:56:58 AM AEST
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A beautiful tribute.... so sincere...Loved this..
Jenni |
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Re: Beautiful You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:57:12 AM AEST
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aww this was beautiful..
rock on,
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Re: Beautiful You
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 01:21:36 PM AEST
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A beautiful tribute.
I'm so sorry for your loss.
I felt you and your emotions through your words
my dear poet. They never really leave us do they.
A part of them always stays with us forever~
A beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
huge heartfelt hugs,
sue m
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Re: Beautiful You
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by Loende on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 03:53:58 PM AEST
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A lovely write full of memories and love. Job well done.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Beautiful You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 09:46:46 AM AEST
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It doesn't take long to decide that an artist of
great distinction and emotional comand of
the human heart , pened this most genuine
poetic masterpiece, that virtualy brought me
to tears when reading this splended poetry.
Ben . . . |
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Re: Beautiful You
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by Starchild7 on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 07:54:59 PM AEST
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That was very touching what a beautiful tribute.
With love and light Starchild |
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