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The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
Contributed by
karoody
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Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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(Notes: I started a forum saying thank you for your comments. I also asked for you to please give response if you know how I might improve my works. My forum is getting no response, except for exiled (thankyou), so I guess you guys get a poem. I don't mind, for my effort is minimal compare to the inspiration behind it. Thank you, friends-especially Mick for creating the platform for us to form these bonds.)
A million thank you's will never be enough
You, my friends, help me more than you know
By reading my poetry, my thoughts-
As if this wasn't enough flattery,
I receive praise and encouragement-
Something never expected.
I joined your group with my writing soul lost,
My esteem tarnished-
I submitted poetry just to see it on screen
Coaxing myself all the while
Because you were a safe audience
Who will never see me
But I was praised, a gift indeed!
A billion dedicated poems will never be enough
You, my friends, inspire me more than you know
By sharing your poetry, your thoughts
As if this gift is not enough
I receive insite, wisdom
You amaze me farther
By shedding new light on my troubles
Reminding me of details that shall make me smile
We shall grow together, friends
Please, show me how to shine half as bright as you
And I will try to show you
All the depths of my world-
A place where we can shine always.
:-)
Copyright ©
karoody
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Re: The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 10:42:32 PM AEST
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ahhh, kara, your a rose @-<<-<<-
this is so sweet and beautiful from your heart and soul, i love your poetry and look forward to more:) huggs n' love to you n' yours, always nessa |
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Re: The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 10:42:59 PM AEST
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Kara, we all feel the same.... thank you..
Excellent write
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:12:58 AM AEST
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this is so true... we must be on the same wave length, i just wrote a poem for this wonderful place... it is such a comfort to be here, yes... and your writing is a plus ::smile::.. blessings... michele
(very well written poem, by the way) |
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Re: The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 12:28:46 PM AEST
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| oh, forgive me, friends. in all my proofreading, i ignored the title. firendship? Friendship....sorry! |
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Re: The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 04:37:00 PM AEST
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| it seems to amaze me how you have read everyone of my poems and i don't know how to thank you for it... i guess that feeling a poet gets when he/she has an audience is remarkable. i'd like to thank you once and probably another time for goin through all my work your poems always seem to grasp my attention there's something about them that holds me thank you kara |
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Re: The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 05:27:22 AM AEST
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Words from the heart, always give me a warm feeling deep inside, Kara Your a friend among friends, for the short time I knowen you you've been one hate of a friend. This poem is another one adding to ever growing collections of hits.
The Phantom |
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Re: The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:55:44 AM AEST
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| Very humble girl, I missed this poem, thanks for guiding me to this.. you are a true friendly soul.. I feel your warming nature as others felt through this poem. good we are all one family. hugs. dear venkat |
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Re: The Depth of Firendship Amazes Me!
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by vahtang on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:29:24 AM AEST
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