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Angels
Contributed by
GemmaLouiseRose
on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 06:57:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hearts have never melted so fast
rays of hope appearing from bleeding skies
no one could have guessed the extent of the pain
the reason for the tears in my eyes
you would be suprised
the roads i have taken
the minds i have broken
the blood ive bled for words unspoken
no amount of time will heal
only poison and smoke can make this real
the scars read out like confessions
the painful lessons, the dark impressions
left blind to corrode
to cut the lines no stitches had sowed
Copyright ©
GemmaLouiseRose
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2008-09-14 06:57:41]
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Re: Angels
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 01:01:46 AM AEST
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My, this is special. Just a glorious array of emotion!
I know there is heartache and pain driving the piece, but there
exists an amount of hope, truth, beauty and comfort. Your author's
note is a perfect introduction to the piece. This was so exceptionally
well written. Your word choices and placement are wonderful!
Great post!!
~ Breezy
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Re: Angels
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:58:49 AM AEST
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this is very deep and heartfelt.. I love the flow of it.. especially the last stanza.. awesome job on this
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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