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confused
Contributed by
SLou
on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 01:33:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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time makes no sense,
sky and ground
are the same.
i've been lost but never found.
i've tripped,
but havn't stopped.
i want what isn't there,
i am calm but still shocked.
i won't,
because i can't.
i am confused,
but still sane
Copyright ©
SLou
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2008-09-14 01:33:14]
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Re: confused
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 02:30:04 AM AEST
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| Simply portrayed and powerful ...Resonates..Nicely done...Russ |
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Re: confused
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 03:16:57 AM AEST
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i am confused sometimes too. it is confusing to be a part of the world. i like the way you write this. i think you are a good poet. i hope if i write about confusion one day it is going to be like this is. if i can i want to ask that you read my poetry if you like it i would be honerd i think you are a very great poet.
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Re: confused
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by onyx on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 02:36:18 AM AEST
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i love all ur poems!
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