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~Rain on the Windows~
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 02:33:29 PM in AEST
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Rain on the windows
she sings in her own tune.
Do we linger with the dark clouds
wishing it was through?
Or bask in its glory
a cleansing moment for the soul?
Embracing the beauty in everything
loving the shining healthy glow.
A storm it is coming
maybe a lesson along the way.
Learning from the tragedy,
or sit and sulk through out the day?
Holding on to the storm,
or letting go in release.
Knowing at the end
there will be hope and peace.
In the ugly darkness
there she is shining on.
The rainbow light and bright
casting glow across the land.
A few drops left, as they fall light upon the skin.
A sobering moment
when the light of truth walks in.
The glory of beauty walks beside the storm.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-09-13 14:33:29]
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by karoody on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 04:10:29 PM AEST
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Cool! I miss a good southern storm! Thankyou! I got in trouble my last hurricane for walking my dog. Katrina. I was in Alabama...woops...
I loved your poem! it was beautifully written! great imagery and thought provoking...i wanna be cleansed. put some soap on my doggie too! lol
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 11:13:37 PM AEST
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Awe, this is really beautiful Shelby. There
really is something about the way the world
looks after a big storm. Maybe because we
appreciate it that much more. Great job!
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 11:33:39 PM AEST
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great write! i loved every second of it. i too have been seeing some of these same storms. great rainbow picture.
awesome post!
d |
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 12:35:39 AM AEST
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wisdom lurks between these raindrops well done little star
Shari |
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 12:49:51 AM AEST
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Michelle, wow. You really make the reader take a hard look at life in a way
that is so unique. This is by far, one of my favourites that you've written. It's
full of insight, beauty and a message that cannot be ignored. You have
a beautiful soul, hun. I LOVE that you placed both pictures here. It
reminds us that no matter what torrents come our way, the calm after is
indescribably beautiful!
Hoping you are keeping well!!!
*huge hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 02:39:18 AM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful ma'am...And wonderful insight!...Russ |
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 04:17:20 AM AEST
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Michelle,
I have to agree with the wonderful comments you have received already. This is among your best work, and considering your repertoire, that is saying something. There is something compelling about rain on the windows. How we are protected on the inside, but can be enchanted by the beauty on the outside. The first picture reminds me of a picture that Roxanne took when she came to visit in July. We went to the Gulf coast and unfortunately in our two day trip there, we were received with rain. But there is something very captivating about seeing a body of water through a window graced with rain. Something too rich for my humble poetic abilities to express, but you've done it well! I also admire the fact that you found something inspirational to write about just before an impending disaster. We all know there is beauty in every form of darkness. A wonderful wonderful write!
SUPERB!!
Daniel
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 04:04:45 AM AEST
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maginificant write.. this is stunning.. and the pics are beautiful .. i love the rainbow after the storm.. beautiful job shellz
rock on,
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Re: ~Rain on the Windows~
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by Alisteal_Rayne on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 04:12:30 PM AEST
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| Wow..... just wow. Beautiful and very well written |
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