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Silence
Contributed by
thefemalemind
on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 10:06:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Silence weighing heavy on me.
Deafening..
Deafening screams.
Each second growing louder;
Pounding; pleading; reeping.
Unbearable thunder resounding,
Echoing.
Paranoid thoughts creeping into view
As white noise parades through.
Covering ears,
Sound still bright.
Deafened until night
Mutilates...
Silence.
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2008-09-13 10:06:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 10:20:35 AM AEST (User
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Wow, I really liked the momentum in this. It was
excruciatingly powerful! I was drawn in by your
descriptions. It's a kind of inner struggle, no?
Well done, poet!
~ Breezy
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