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cant escape
Contributed by
SLou
on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 04:02:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The wind,
it is screaming.
The thunder,
it is shouting.
The clouds spell doom.
i cant get out.
But the birds,
they are singing.
And the sun,
it is shining.
And the people,
they are laughing.
But i am falling.
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SLou
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2008-09-13 04:02:56]
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Re: cant escape
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 04:32:05 AM AEST
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| very good! |
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Re: cant escape
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 02:44:28 AM AEST
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| Powerful indeed! Life all around and we're invisible...Excellent |
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Re: cant escape
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by PlainFreshRain on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 05:00:55 PM AEST
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to tell you the truth...
you bring it all back home to you.
Isn't it not in the least rare that what is polar opposite
to our emotions and feelings and life circumstances,
is usually what is happening to other people ,and (as you drew
our attention to) the landscape around us.
read all your poems to date, hope you keep writing.
Conal |
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