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3 reminders
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 03:36:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Three reminders
of a night gone by
distant yet so close
Both of us looking
for warm a embrace
with nothing etched in stone
we found and shared
our comfort fix.
we didn't feel alone
Now i'm left with
three reminders
of a night so long, but gone
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redsleeve
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2008-09-13 03:36:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 3 reminders
(User Rating: 1 ) by SirCallower on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 03:57:10 AM AEST (User
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great poem!
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Re: 3 reminders
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 05:50:35 AM AEST (User
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As we sit in our robes at our desks we applaud your simple and gentle poem. It is the way you open and close this poem which has given it such enormity. Three reminders of a night that must have been made of dreams. In a sense we are wondering if you might want to express more of the night. Yet we come to find it is not the night you want the reader to feel. You want the reader to imagine the night and feel the reminders that are left behind. This is a good work of art. Sound and gentle with an great effect.
May three spirits visit you tonight to remind you that Christmas is coming. When you awake in the morning give the boy beneath your window a rubble for a turkey or he will eat your face. That kid is a zombie!
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Re: 3 reminders
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 01:47:17 PM AEST (User
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I have come to really love and enjoy
your wonderful writes my dear poet friend.
You give my mind such thoughts and leave it
to wonder off to places.
An excellent write. Thanks for sharing it~
huge hugs,
dreamer |
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