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and we thought we had it hard
Contributed by
Kodes
on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 12:21:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Eyes watching from the dark
Breathing bearly noticable
Waiting for hours to make its mark
Just wanting to be full
The feeling never coming
And always wanting more
But the idea always huming
In the back of there mind like a chore
This life must be excruttiating
Always wanting what they cant have
A purpose always fading
A eternal life driving them mad
Never finding the feeling of love
Insanity hanging by a wire
It must be hard to have the life of
A blood sucking vampire
Copyright ©
Kodes
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2008-09-12 12:21:20]
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Re: and we thought we had it hard
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 12:33:32 PM AEST
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that would be rough.. you had me wondering all the way through, lol,
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Re: and we thought we had it hard
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 12:34:18 PM AEST
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*Smiling here* I am not usually a lover of dark poetry..... but the title suggested something else to me so I read your poem. However, it was good enough to sustain my interest until the end. Well done...
Welcome to YPDC....
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