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Twisted Metal
Contributed by
undead_poet14
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hang from my cut and battered wrists
Blood running down my arms
And onto my filth-ridden clothes
The twisted metal form the chains
The chains that hold me back
My dreams are shattered and spit on
I want to kill
I have a longing to give others pain
No one should have to live this way
No one but me
Even my tears burn with the sting of hate
The sting of anger
Look into my eyes and see
See the tourture you’ve caused
All because of you
Love means nothing in this world
Nothing but ache and sorrow
I used to believe
But now
Nothing is there
I hang from my cut and battered wrists
Blood running down my arms
And onto my filth-ridden clothes
The twisted metal form the chains
The chains that hold me back
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2003-03-18 20:45:00]
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Re: Twisted Metal
(User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:19:54 PM AEST
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| this is so good...i love it...i'm so sorry...forget him/her, they're not worth your tears, anyone who can write like this is truly beautiful... |
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Re: Twisted Metal
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by undead_poet14 on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 08:06:33 PM AEST
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| thanx ^^ it was a guy- just to say... thanx again for your kind words... |
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