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Hope
Contributed by
SLou
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Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 04:59:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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hope is an expectation,
hope will catch you if you fall,
hope is goodness for one and all.
hope is not a worry,
hope is peace of mind,
hope is like a treasure to find.
hope is optimistic,
hope is a sunny day,
hope is a happy way
hope is a light at the end of a tunnel,
hope is a smile not a frown,
hope will usually let you down
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SLou
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2008-09-09 04:59:21]
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Re: Hope
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by redsleeve on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 05:04:50 AM AEST
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nice little twist at the end. isn't it the truth though.
great post. |
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Re: Hope
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 05:05:06 AM AEST
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hello!
this is sooo good!
well done!
keep them up!
if you go into members listing at the top of the page you can see everyone that's on it right now!
Only 5, I put on 2 more poems!
Beth xxxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Hope
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 05:07:56 AM AEST
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well woven words, i must say i agree wholeheartedly with you, warm welcome to ypdc:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hope
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 12:09:43 PM AEST
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hmm a poem u wrote wen u were bored aye? well u should be bored more often! haha good poem, i enjoyed it. u created a flow of increasing hope throughout until the end, which some realistic events i can concur. yea...i'm glad i'm pessimistic haha. good stuff. take care
-K.Z. |
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