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A Black Dress To Show Your True Color
Contributed by
jcfor3ver
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Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 09:08:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A lady in a black dress
She is a temptress
For all of the boys
With their liquored minds
And condescending hearts
Now I know why
You stand there and cry
To fool the boys with gullible feelings
Leaving nothing left to heal
Can't you see?
The damage you've done and the mess you've made
Just the way you like it
Your plot to parade, a victory of disgrace
To the morals you hold, the worst in the pot
Of golden girls, a beautiful fakeness so cold
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jcfor3ver
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2008-09-08 09:08:33]
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Re: A Black Dress To Show Your True Color
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 11:14:16 AM AEST
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This is quite interesting. I am caught by the last line. It is such a
heroic and veracious statement. So few find courage enough to
call a spade a spade, (myself included). I despise this kind of character.
Someone who beguiles the opposite sex with pretentiousness and
false emotion. >:( There is nothing more vile, except the action of
deceit, which I shall not get into here on your fine work.
Outstanding write! Kudos!!
~ Breezy
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Re: A Black Dress To Show Your True Color
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 12:59:20 PM AEST
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(sigh) sometimes girls make me so confused and angry haha. i'm no sexist or anything, but they can be really complicated in their intentions/motives/actions. but yes, the body is just a cover-up for who we really are. fool's gold as i would call it. nice write. hope to read more of ur pieces. take care
-K.Z. |
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