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**Here Comes The Night Again**
Contributed by
dark_angel111
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Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 08:41:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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as the night falls
it's gettin darker
all the pain, the memories & the past re-arisin
even the roses become bitter
as the sun fades away
as the light dissapears
now i can say
the words trapped in my heart, at my ears
they're hauntin me again, my darkest fears
the gentle moonlight
through my clouds it finds a way
gives me hope, a reason to fight
as in my restless stillness i lay
slowly losin my sight
my heart never stopped to pray
as the night swallow the smiles
i try to hang on to my heart
but far away it's tryin to fly, reach the cold sky
and now i know in this life i don't have a part
as the night lay its darkness
deep inside my veins
i feel the coldness
reachin my bones
can't think of anythin but the pain
can't take a breath
i can see my blood rain
it's comin again, my everynight death
everythin's faintin but stays the sorrow
hauntin the nights , demandin my agony
to see in my eyes the dreadful horror
feelin a thousand knives stabin me
here comes the night again
hours pass as decades
here it comes , i can see its chains
and tomorrow it restarts again & again & again
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dark_angel111
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2008-09-08 08:41:09]
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Re: **Here Comes The Night Again**
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by wizard on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 08:44:41 AM AEST
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this piece has great potential, the spelling errors detract from the quality of this poem... i realize that you may have done this for some type of dramatic effect... i don't think it worked ..
keep writing, there is some great promise here,
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Re: **Here Comes The Night Again**
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 10:16:28 AM AEST
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repeating nightmares, how awful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: **Here Comes The Night Again**
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 08:32:25 AM AEST
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This poem has such a mysterious air to it and kind of sad. I hope that some day you find the night and darkness a calming and peaceful time. There is beauty in the darkness.
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