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Rainbow
Contributed by
ramfire
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Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 06:35:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Pretty rainbow in the sky
Such colors are there
Promise of God's loving care
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2008-09-08 06:35:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rainbow
(User Rating: 1 ) by navydocny on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 06:44:13 AM AEST (User
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I love Haikus...
This one is very good.....
Keep it up!
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Re: Rainbow
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 08:29:35 AM AEST (User
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this was a great little poem, but a haiku is 5-7-5...not 7-5-7 ...
great post otherwise,
wiz |
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