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Cookie Crumble
Contributed by
emilyrose
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Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 03:23:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Cookie crumble,
Royal rumble,
Sometimes my hunk,
Makes me stumble,
As such a sweet guy,
Would surely make one shy!
I wish to impress,
But for that, I fear,
I shouldn't be dressed?!
O_o
Copyright ©
emilyrose
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2008-09-08 03:23:18]
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Re: Cookie Crumble
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by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 06:55:03 AM AEST
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Re: Cookie Crumble
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