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The Artisan
Contributed by
haku
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Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:33:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Created so masterfully
By the Artisan's hand
A great bronze work of wonder
In the garden of life I stand
Eroded by time and acidic atmosphere
I feel now a lesser work
The end is drawing near
Let the Artisan break my mold
Because this long standing carcass
Has grown tired and old
Let my mold wobble
And fall off the shelf
For I like the mold
Am just a shell
Of my former self !
Haku
Copyright ©
haku
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2002-07-30 13:33:17]
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Re: The Artisan
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:39:09 PM AEST
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But the soul just gets more and more beautiful with each passing day. This was a great write! My grandfather would appreciate it... he doesn't like growing older ;).
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Re: The Artisan
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:41:46 PM AEST
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Gee Gregg, have you been reading my thoughts again????
Miss ya!!
Jenni |
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