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BeachBomb be my Baby
Contributed by
sandscribble
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Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 12:03:31 PM in AEST
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Beneath the Stars, on the sand,
I could be your good friend
maybe get wet, chase waves
If I were helpful and We built a castle,
Would I soon get a peek?
Let's play! want to?
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sandscribble
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Re: BeachBomb be my Baby
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by shelby on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 12:07:04 PM AEST
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I raise my eyebrow at this one scribble you naughty boy ROFLMAO cute cute
hugs
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Re: BeachBomb be my Baby
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 12:11:37 PM AEST
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lol.. welcome to YPDC.... hope you enjoy it here. Hope to see more of your work....
I have to read Beach Bomb's work now....
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Re: BeachBomb be my Baby
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by wizard on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 12:27:01 PM AEST
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good luck with that ...
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Re: BeachBomb be my Baby
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 01:14:44 PM AEST
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What in the name of (explicit) (explicit) (explicit) (explicit) is this?!?!?!
THIS IS A POETRY SITE AND THIS SHOULD BE POSTED IN THE FORUMS OR SENT PMS NOT HERE! As we speak I am looking for Brandon, Dylan, and the rest of the 90210 gang. I feel like I am trapped in the middle of some psycho teenage high school beach party and that Frankie and Anette are trapped somewhere under piles of panties and boxer shorts with the words "Corona Light" listed on them while some guy who tries to look like Kurt Cobain, tries to sound like John Mayer, and has the brain of Paris Hilton tries to sing a song about having a PEEK! Hey Beach Bomb send this guy a photo of your breasts and STOP THIS INSANITY.
Again.....THIS IS NOT POETRY!
stop burying the good poetry with the sands of high school notebook grafitti.
PUKEY FACE!
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Re: BeachBomb be my Baby
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by Sandscribble on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 02:04:50 PM AEST
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damn the poetry sheriff
you say anything about the little write you want, that's welcome.
Don`t call Me names..who do you think you are? thats not right and you know it. |
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Re: BeachBomb be my Baby
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by BeachBomb on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 02:47:27 PM AEST
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Wooo SandScribbles.....
I would surely love your help
To build a castle in the sand
I'd definitely let you have that peek
Even touch more than just my hand.
Your baby, BB |
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Re: BeachBomb be my Baby
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by Sandscribble on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 03:37:09 PM AEST
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I`ll get the coolers BB
meet me by the ocean
We can search for shells
and pretty litttle stones
to decorate our castle.. Frankie...lol! |
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