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Desolate side of lonely
Contributed by
shelby
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Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 11:57:21 AM in AEST
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There she lay’s out before me
reminding me of a wanton lover
waiting for dusk to fall
escaping into her lovers arms.
Lonely sitting out there
spread between hard edges and sand.
Barren in her need and wanting.
Seeking replenishing springs of love
to carry her softly into the shadows of night.
Maybe it’s a peaceful reminder
that lonely never is complete.
Just a thought in itself, some don’t need that deeply.
So she sits, the desolate valley, awaiting something.
Or maybe nothing at all, happy in her own setting.
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2008-09-07 11:57:21]
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Re: Desolate side of lonely
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 12:06:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful descriptions, Michelle...
Enjoyed this...
Jenni |
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Re: Desolate side of lonely
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by Sandscribble on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 12:22:36 PM AEST
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this poem was worth the stop,
can I have two friends? nice picture too. S |
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Re: Desolate side of lonely
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 01:01:05 PM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Desolate side of lonely
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 04:27:06 PM AEST
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sooo beautiful shelby, and the picture is pretty too, it must have been breathtaking in person!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Desolate side of lonely
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 03:13:33 AM AEST
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Michelle, first, let me say that picture is IMPECCABLE!! The mount in the distance
has captured my special attention. It is the only thing still being kissed by the sun
and it is absolute in its beauty. I ADORE it!!
Secondly, the piece itself is beauty wrapped in beauty. I especially loved this..
"that lonely never is complete."
oh that is exquisite!
*hugs*
~ Breezy |
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Re: Desolate side of lonely
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 09:44:41 PM AEST
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Utterly beautiful and brilliant as always...
Hugs
Rich |
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