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another´s eyes
Contributed by
kolbrun
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If I looked through another´s eyes
would I truly like what I see
the person I appear to others
the person I seem to be
would I see the caring I feel
would I know what is in my heart
or would I just be another face
eyes un-met in a crouded space
would I give me a chance
or be put of the visual
would I laugh at my jokes
and find me acceptable
would I laugh at my dreams
that now, to me are important
would I think me strange
andd slightly deranged
I like to belive I would like me
to have as a best friend
someone I could count on
someone trust-worthy to the end
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kolbrun
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2003-03-18 16:45:00]
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Re: another´s eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 06:36:30 PM AEST
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| ohh, this is so interesting to me, i had two thoughts, one the person walking by was a stranger, would they know or care to know anything about you as a person, and second, it was like you walked by your 'self' and wanted to be friends, in which you would have had a lifelong friendship, a very good thing indeed, great write, *hugs* nessa |
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Re: another´s eyes
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by venus86 on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:04:16 AM AEST
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Hello Kolbrún, it's so nice to see you back here..I missed reading your poetry very much.
I love this...and it's very inspiring ending.
elly XX |
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Re: another´s eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:05:46 AM AEST
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| Been here recently, and before. As elly said, there are just those times when you're just living. If this was personal I hope you guys make it through.:) |
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Re: another´s eyes
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by karoody on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:28:08 PM AEST
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this is an excellent work. tis very well-written and thought provoking. best wishes to you!
kara |
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Re: another´s eyes
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 02:32:32 PM AEST
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| A very good introspective thought and excellent poem. All that detracts are a few errors in typing or spelling so be sure you proof read. However, the greatest importance is in the creativity from your inspired thoughts. I enjoy your poems alot. bizzy |
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Re: another´s eyes
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 06:01:08 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking.......but to a large extent we are very similar to one another. Our senses cannot differ greatly or we would not survive. The same would be our fate if our intelligence and/or physique was impaired.
It is only in our experience and imagination that we can tolerate wider differences.
Well you have been getting to know yourself very well for some time and I'm sure are going to be very successfull. Most of us seem to manage that, even some of the ones that occupy separate bodies. |
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