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In The Mood For Fun
Contributed by
BeachBomb
on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 08:06:53 AM in AEST
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I am a beach bum, simple and sweet
I live all alone on the shore
You’ll find that I can be quite discreet
If you wanna come back for more!
I don't know what's gotten into me
Suddenly I am in the mood for fun.
I think I'm gonna play in the sea.
Care to join me for some fun?
We can both go for a short swim
Or simply play hide and seek.
Please pal, don't look so grim
Soon I may let you have a quick peek.
Dawn
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BeachBomb
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2008-09-07 08:06:53]
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Re: In The Mood For Fun
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by apollo on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 08:24:00 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. its really well written and also has a little tease at the end. the last line i mean "soon i may let you have a quick peek." very vivid.i like this. |
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Re: In The Mood For Fun
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by BeachBomb on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 08:33:43 AM AEST
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Glad you enjoyed this, apollo. Perhaps one day I can make you see *stars* hahaha
Thanks for the read and comment.
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Re: In The Mood For Fun
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by Sandscribble on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 11:08:50 AM AEST
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| I like stars, and swimming can I have a peek? |
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Re: In The Mood For Fun
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 12:19:51 PM AEST
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Hi Dawn, welcome to YPDC.... This is cute... and a bit juicy....
Hope to see more from you.
Jenni |
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Re: In The Mood For Fun
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by shelby on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 12:41:15 PM AEST
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LOL welcome to ypdc, hey Im all game for a dip in the sea whooooooooooooo
Cute write
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Re: In The Mood For Fun
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 01:06:50 PM AEST
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At what points between lines 1 and 12 did this seem like a good idea to you? Just curious.
Welcome aboard though I think you got onto the wrong ship this is YPDC (your POETRY dot com) not the Love Boat. While YPDC is exciting and new ummmm we don't want to peek at anything you got unless what you have is poetry which so far.....I'm waiting.
EHarmony and Match.com are what I think you were looking for.
Stabbing myself in the brain with a fork!
SCM
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Re: In The Mood For Fun
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by BeachBomb on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 03:09:06 PM AEST
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Thank you, SCM for your lovely comment.
BUT:
Unless you want to join in the fun,
I'd suggest you stay out of the sun.
If you think I am on the wrong ship
you should see me move my hip.
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Re: In The Mood For Fun
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 03:27:32 PM AEST
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We stand on the edge of the shore in our robes wearing our death masks- our very evil death masks, staring, upon this silly beach party and massacre built on botched poetry. We turn our heads simultaneously, the right half turning to the left, the left half turning to the right, then nod our heads in unison. We then approach this beach party in order to turn it into a beach party massacre. We then proceed to toss hard copies of Poe, Lord Byron, Tennyson, Swinburne and other actual poets at the rest of you hacks.
This is a poetry website, not a peep show.
The Ghost Alarms
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