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Pieces of my heart
Contributed by
kolbrun
on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
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Attempting to express
The feelings in my heart
I put my pen to paper
And try to make a start.
Endeavouring to capture
Words that just aren´t there
Is the language of the heart
Spoken anywhere?
Yet still something is telling me
Of words I must impart
So stumblingly I start to cry
To translate from my heart.
At best it will be a shadow
Of what a heart can say
But rather than give up
I write it anyway.
And when at last I´m finished
I ponder on my heart
Have I managed to convey
A small piece of my heart ?
Copyright ©
kolbrun
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2003-03-18 16:25:00]
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Re: Pieces of my heart
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 06:25:35 PM AEST
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| kolbrún this is lovely, and yes, i see your heart in this, beautiful write, hugs n' love always nessa |
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Re: Pieces of my heart
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 07:23:29 PM AEST
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| This is lovely ... and I think you took the first step on your own :))) well written ... Jan |
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Re: Pieces of my heart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:07:02 AM AEST
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| Very nice, well written. we can only look forward. |
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Re: Pieces of my heart
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by karoody on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:32:44 PM AEST
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your beautiful heart is seen very well in the things you write. I believe you all ready know the first step. lovely write. I truely enjoy your style.
kara |
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Re: Pieces of my heart
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 02:19:05 PM AEST
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| You put the pen to paper, kolbrun, took the first step, then saw your heart more clearly as you expressed yourself in 'words that just aren't there.' I've felt this way often and found that putting the pen to paper helps. Perhaps its something necessary in the psychic of a writer. Wonderful poem! bizzy |
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