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Contributed by polaris773 on Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 12:46:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

No more dragging me down with you
look at the things to hold on to
you have to look up before you look down
and you have to see the faces of you people who still have hope for us
take a seat and talk to me, take a hit and hold it and release the smoke with your fears

the hope we all look for has to start within us
if you can fell it than sit down ,lit it up and
think about what’s bringing you down
blow out your worries into the air and
watch the wind blow it away for you

put the sad music away and hear new words
words that lift you up and get you higher
we’ve suffered through our self-inflected depression
now just relax exhale then inhale as much of life as you can

the hope we all look for has to start within us
if you can fell it than sit down ,lit it up and
think about what’s bringing you down
blow out your worries into the air and
watch the wind blow it away for you

look at the sky and see how high it is
swallowed by your problems and doubts
we’ve almost forgot about our favorite star
the star we always look for and always burns bright for us
even when its surrounded by darkness

don’t wait for your savior be your own
don’t break the ties that keep your life together
there’s still faith in the faithless so
look up and take the hit as hard as you can
so the next one wont hurt as bad.

Copyright Â© polaris773 ... [ 2008-09-06 12:46:21]
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